Matt
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Post by Matt on Mar 2, 2011 17:06:30 GMT -5
Title says it all Please comment guys, I don't feel like I'm improving tbh so I really need advice!
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Mar 2, 2011 17:12:39 GMT -5
Wow, that was pretty good! You are improving thats for sure. The lift up looked great but next time move punks arms more cause they were kinda stiff. I liked the littl walk/run that punk did befor he threw him through the table. Also you need to move kofi's arms more too cause he was stiff also. The table break looked really good. You should of made kofi have a reaction to getting slammed through a table, reactions always help the animation. I liked that you had CM Punk do a taunt after.
Overall 7/10
Keep it up!
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Post by The Viper on Mar 2, 2011 17:12:41 GMT -5
Not too bad tbh. it's really smooth, and i liked the table break. it was quite stiff though. also i thought that kofi could have had more of a reaction Overall: 6/10
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Matt
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Post by Matt on Mar 2, 2011 17:18:24 GMT -5
Wow, that was pretty good! You are improving thats for sure. The lift up looked great but next time move punks arms more cause they were kinda stiff. I liked the littl walk/run that punk did befor he threw him through the table. Also you need to move kofi's arms more too cause he was stiff also. The table break looked really good. You should of made kofi have a reaction to getting slammed through a table, reactions always help the animation. I liked that you had CM Punk do a taunt after. Overall 7/10 Keep it up! Thanks Jesse! I really appreciate it! I'm not just another one of those come-and-go animators that give up after a few months, I really want to become a big name in animating even if it takes me a few years to do so :/ Anyway thanks for the comment, I +1 you
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Mar 2, 2011 17:23:22 GMT -5
Thanks for the +1 ;D I also subed you
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Matt
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Post by Matt on Mar 2, 2011 17:25:25 GMT -5
Thanks for the +1 ;D I also subed you Thanks!!!
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