Mezzo
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Post by Mezzo on Aug 20, 2011 17:08:38 GMT -5
another video  |
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Post by wwextreme25 on Aug 20, 2011 17:10:53 GMT -5
first of all i couldnt really see anything...your camera was on like, half of the animation which was dissapointing  did you use string as it looked like you used your hand...if so string would be a lot more beneficial way to make animations look better...also take more pics to get smoothness and bend the body in slight movements throughout the bend so it doesnt look stiff  |
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Mezzo
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Post by Mezzo on Aug 20, 2011 17:35:24 GMT -5
thanks wwextreme Yes I used string, the thing is - i made this video 3 days ago. i just wanted to upload it because my camera's battery was low so i couldnt make new ones... how ever, it sucks :/ i hope my newer videos are better, i can post some if you want to or ill send you a pm thanks for your answer though |
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Post by wwextreme25 on Aug 20, 2011 17:46:24 GMT -5
post them its easier to get feedback |
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Mezzo
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Post by Mezzo on Aug 21, 2011 8:34:38 GMT -5
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Post by Mezzo on Aug 23, 2011 7:40:19 GMT -5
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Post by cooperman4 on Aug 23, 2011 15:11:29 GMT -5
Well, first of all, just to let you know, the first move is the Hilo not the Swanton Bomb  . Hilo : Not bad. It needs a reaction & London was stiff. But it was smooth & there was no shadows on it (only strings that you could edit using Photofilter). But, it stills one of your best ones. Nicely done. Standing Moonsault : So, this one was ok. RVD was stiff in mid-air & Sandman too. Exercice more on the reactions & pay more attention to the stiffness because that screwed up your work. But it's nice. Keep on making animations & on exercising ; Practise makes the master. Good luck . |
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Post by Mezzo on Aug 25, 2011 9:38:17 GMT -5
Well, first of all, just to let you know, the first move is the Hilo not the Swanton Bomb . Hilo : Not bad. It needs a reaction & London was stiff. But it was smooth & there was no shadows on it (only strings that you could edit using Photofilter). But, it stills one of your best ones. Nicely done. Standing Moonsault : So, this one was ok. RVD was stiff in mid-air & Sandman too. Exercice more on the reactions & pay more attention to the stiffness because that screwed up your work. But it's nice. Keep on making animations & on exercising ; Practise makes the master. Good luck . thanks man! i will do and i wrote senton in the title box not swantn  |
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Aug 25, 2011 20:57:13 GMT -5
Not bad man,
Just work on the shakyness of the figures. Dont take pictures when there still moving in the air.
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Post by Mezzo on Aug 26, 2011 22:19:31 GMT -5
thanks!
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did you use string as it looked like you used your hand...if so string would be a lot more beneficial way to make animations look better...also take more pics to get smoothness and bend the body in slight movements throughout the bend so it doesnt look stiff 
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