maicron
T.A.P Rookie
Maicron
Posts: 54
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Post by maicron on Aug 23, 2011 16:27:10 GMT -5
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Post by cooperman4 on Aug 23, 2011 19:34:01 GMT -5
Really Nice for a first attempt, but there's many problems on the animation :
-Shaky camera.
-Strings showing.
-No reaction from Kendrick.
-And a bad lighting (i mean, you have to use the white lighting, not the yellow one).
Try to fix these and to exercice more.
PS : You have potential just work your ass off & you''l see that it's gonna pay.
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Aug 25, 2011 20:55:56 GMT -5
Not bad, when you use image codes use the "Direct link" Basicly what cooper said, Sorry for lazy comment im tired  |
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Post by jpsp98"THE XBLKID" on Sept 4, 2011 15:16:05 GMT -5
what figure is that?
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Post by The Viper on Sept 4, 2011 17:53:05 GMT -5
Not too bad. The animation didn't seem to be at all stiff, which is a good thing, but it was very choppy. The reaction was also quite nice, but i did notice your arm in one pic :/ Also the camera was very shakey, and i saw alot of string, but the string isnt too big a deal, just seemed worth pointing out
OVERALL: 4.5/10
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Post by jman8463 on Sept 14, 2011 18:05:22 GMT -5
Animation was ok the background left a light gleam try
changing your background to white, the 630 Splash itself
was choppy and slow also try using longer pieces of string
and edit it and your camera was shaky try keeping it still,
make sure you give the victim a decent reaction other then
that a Overall decent attempt 5.9/10
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EAW122409
T.A.P Elite Member 
TAP Original
Posts: 345
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Post by EAW122409 on Sept 14, 2011 19:28:31 GMT -5
The 630 it self was very good! but there was some flaws with the rest. Try to keep the camera still and edit photo's, sure it's a pain but it's soooo worth it!. Lighting was farely good, rope bounce was great! but reaction could have been better very good attempt though just try to work on those things
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