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Post by "The Future" BoundForGlory11 on Dec 17, 2011 12:40:35 GMT -5
You guys like it? Any advice?!?!? ;D
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Post by jman8463 on Dec 17, 2011 16:56:26 GMT -5
It was a nice attempt Bound but unfortunately the animation was incredibly fidgety, choppy, stiff
and very unrealistic however in order to make it look smoother I suggest taking your time after
each pic and move the joints according to the each frame. I do admire you will to attempt this
but I also think you should start off with something more simpler.
Edit: Possibly use a Deluxe figure for moves such as a GTS to make it
look more realistic also perhaps if you would like to see my attempt
at a GTS i'll can give it a go if you like?
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Post by cooperman4 on Dec 18, 2011 15:37:30 GMT -5
One thing to say before commenting your animation : Shorter your intro please. An intro can't be longer than an animation.
Now up to the ani.
It was really smooth, and I really like it.
But, it was really stiff & fidgety, so next time : bend the figures. This makes your animations not so stiff. It makes moves look much better and look more real.
The reaction wasn't really realistic and impactfull, so next time let it be.
Lighting was ok, but next time, have a better amount of light, Light is essential for an animation Video, Poor lighting can ruin what would of been a Good animation.
Don't forget to take a picture for every little movement. This makes the animation flow better and smoother, & also, add a little something extra. Whether it's a taunt at the beginning or an over the top reaction.
In fact, you have to try to make things as real as they can be.
Overall comment : Nice animation, could've been way better, but nice efforts. Keep on imrpoving!
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