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Post by jman8463 on Dec 17, 2011 22:01:57 GMT -5
I'm not very experienced with string so I though I would start of simple and do some walking and a punch. You don't see much walking because some of the frames were deleted but regardless hope you enjoy it.  If anyone has has any advice, please feel free to critique my animation good or bad as long as it may be so of constructive criticism I'll make sure I heed any tips available to me. Sorry about the string I just wanted to put something up before today's end and I was somewhat lazy to edit. |
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Post by cooperman4 on Dec 18, 2011 10:05:33 GMT -5
Well, it wasn't bad, but, it could have been better. The animation was very slow, stiff, and obviously, choppy. Jericho didn't had a reaction before falling, and this ruined your work. Camera was shaking & the lighting changed like 3 times or so, but the quality of the pictures was amazing. Next time, take more pictures (like 2 times the ammount of this one) and this will let the animation be smooth and flow well. Fix your camera with your tri-pod. Make sure to use only one light. Nice animation overall, keep on practicing  |
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Post by jman8463 on Dec 18, 2011 14:20:25 GMT -5
Well, it wasn't bad, but, it could have been better. The animation was very slow, stiff, and obviously, choppy. Jericho didn't had a reaction before falling, and this ruined your work. Camera was shaking & the lighting changed like 3 times or so, but the quality of the pictures was amazing. Next time, take more pictures (like 2 times the ammount of this one) and this will let the animation be smooth and flow well. Fix your camera with your tri-pod. Make sure to use only one light. Nice animation overall, keep on practicing I really do appreciate the construction aspects of your comment and it really means a lot. Hopefully by the upcoming week I'll have a few animations out, it regards to the lighting I believe the shadows, sun glares and shakiness caused the lighting shade to change within those frames so next time I'll try using a lamp a see if this improves the lighting. Please enjoy +1 for great advice. |
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Post by jpsp98"THE XBLKID" on Dec 26, 2011 0:32:37 GMT -5
the animation was to big try 250x188 the animation was slow and shaky move more the joints and i see the strings
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