#Showoff
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Post by #Showoff on Dec 29, 2011 18:37:55 GMT -5
Here's my stip for the Raw Episode coming up. Didn't feel like editing. Comment, rate, like subscribe, all that good stuff. Thanks for viewing.
UPDATE:
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Post by jman8463 on Dec 29, 2011 19:12:12 GMT -5
Wow that People's elbow was amazing great job OTW, the set up for the People's elbow was great but John Morrison moved in a few frames in the start. The running was excellent however there were a few shadows throughout it. The people's elbow itself was somewhat slow and only done partially correct, the elbow part isn't extended into the opponents chest in actuality its more of a shoulder bump to the other opponents abdomen/ shoulder as well. This isn't
a problem it still qualifies as a People's Elbow. John Morrison's reaction was weak and the elbow lacked impact. Regardless, great animation OTW and you don't show any signs of rust.
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#Showoff
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Post by #Showoff on Dec 29, 2011 20:57:57 GMT -5
Wow that People's elbow was amazing great job OTW, the set up for the People's elbow was great but John Morrison moved in a few frames in the start. The running was excellent however there were a few shadows throughout it. The people's elbow itself was somewhat slow and only done partially correct, the elbow part isn't extended into the opponents chest in actuality its more of a shoulder bump to the other opponents abdomen/ shoulder as well. This isn't a problem it still qualifies as a People's Elbow. John Morrison's reaction was weak and the elbow lacked impact. Regardless, great animation OTW and you don't show any signs of rust. OOHH. Thanks for the feedback. I never really paid attention to how the Rock did it. Now I see why it looked weird, thanks. |
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Post by jman8463 on Dec 29, 2011 22:27:14 GMT -5
Wow that People's elbow was amazing great job OTW, the set up for the People's elbow was great but John Morrison moved in a few frames in the start. The running was excellent however there were a few shadows throughout it. The people's elbow itself was somewhat slow and only done partially correct, the elbow part isn't extended into the opponents chest in actuality its more of a shoulder bump to the other opponents abdomen/ shoulder as well. This isn't a problem it still qualifies as a People's Elbow. John Morrison's reaction was weak and the elbow lacked impact. Regardless, great animation OTW and you don't show any signs of rust. OOHH. Thanks for the feedback. I never really paid attention to how the Rock did it. Now I see why it looked weird, thanks. Sure no problem, just trying to help  |
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Post by Skits Hero on Dec 29, 2011 23:02:45 GMT -5
Simply amazing  The taunts was smooth as a baby's @$$ !! The running was awesome. Try to use a white background paper so there won't be any shadow.. the running was smooth.. Everything except the shadow was awesome! |
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ZombieMan949
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Post by ZombieMan949 on Dec 30, 2011 2:15:36 GMT -5
Oh dang Im screwed. Curse you LOL. Jk but really nice animation it was perfection I think you got the title For the b division. Wait this is for the B division right? Because if it is do you consider your self a beginner,? cause if you do your out of you mind your like a pro. =0
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#Showoff
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Post by #Showoff on Dec 30, 2011 11:32:17 GMT -5
Oh dang Im screwed. Curse you LOL. Jk but really nice animation it was perfection I think you got the title For the b division. Wait this is for the B division right? Because if it is do you consider your self a beginner,? cause if you do your out of you mind your like a pro. =0 Thanks for the nice comments guys! Yeah this is for the B-Divison. I'm trying to start my way up from bottom to top so what better way to start off then with the B-Divison. I wouldn't really consider myself a pro because alot of people don't really know me. I think I'm underrated.  |
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#Showoff
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Post by #Showoff on Dec 31, 2011 15:28:17 GMT -5
Updated. New Ani.
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Post by jman8463 on Dec 31, 2011 16:49:22 GMT -5
Nice animation there OTW, the codebreaker was very smooth but the shadows
somewhat degraded the animation unfortunately. The spear was ok but it seem a
bit fast and Dolph's reaction looked kind of weird. Overall nice animation, not
your best however.
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Post by Skits Hero on Jan 1, 2012 10:55:30 GMT -5
The codebreaker was smooth and it's also stiff. I saw some shadow and string.. It doesn't have enough reaction when It suddenly just changed into a spear. The spear running was very good, The reaction was awesome I think this was a good animation |
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