zws982
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Post by zws982 on Dec 29, 2011 21:14:49 GMT -5
Haven't animated in a couple of weeks so i am quite rusty
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#Showoff
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Post by #Showoff on Dec 29, 2011 21:34:11 GMT -5
Nice, bro. The lighting was great, although the camera seemed a bit fidgety. Don't worry, I also have that problem. Punk's running looked a bit weird, but still good nonetheless. Taunt was nice, I did also see string, but everyone gets lazy to edit that out. You might just want to take the string out of the ring when you're not using it. Impact was fine, rope bounce could have been longer. Just work on the reaction and you'll be good! Great job, and good luck on the match!
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zws982
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Post by zws982 on Dec 29, 2011 21:39:00 GMT -5
Nice, bro. The lighting was great, although the camera seemed a bit fidgety. Don't worry, I also have that problem. Punk's running looked a bit weird, but still good nonetheless. Taunt was nice, I did also see string, but everyone gets lazy to edit that out. You might just want to take the string out of the ring when you're not using it. Impact was fine, rope bounce could have been longer. Just work on the reaction and you'll be good! Great job, and good luck on the match! Thanks man and it was my second try at running with string
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Post by jman8463 on Dec 29, 2011 22:42:06 GMT -5
Not bad zws982, The running was choppy and somewhat fast. During the taunt at the start the person on the ground moved in the first few frames along with CM Punk. The string was visible throughout most of the animation.
The lighting changed when CM Punk was about to go into the People's elbow. The drop was fast and the move was only partially correct,the elbow into the chest normally but its more of a shoulder bump into the opponents shoulder abdomens.
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Post by Skits Hero on Dec 29, 2011 22:48:03 GMT -5
The taunts at the beginning gave the move a nice touch. The running was somewhat choppy, maybe try take more pictures. I see string so, try to edit them out Although the position of the ring changed during the ani', try to keep them steady.. Maybe use sticky tape? and the lighting also changed so make sure you use some lambs.
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ZombieMan949
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Post by ZombieMan949 on Dec 29, 2011 23:52:42 GMT -5
Dang I thought I would be able to win by default lol Nice animation
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