ZombieMan949
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ZMW Animations- The Real Dead Man
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Post by ZombieMan949 on Jan 8, 2012 12:33:06 GMT -5
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#Showoff
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Post by #Showoff on Jan 8, 2012 13:38:57 GMT -5
Pretty good animation, Zombie. Christian in the air was a little slow, not so fidgety but still good. I noticed that while Christian was close but still not touching Miz, he just landed on him. (not sure if you got what I mean). Almost like it missed 2 pictures. Reaction is great, love the rope bounce, somehow I can't get it to bounce like that (thass wha she said). Editing string can be a hassle, so I won't take points off there. Overall, good animation. Hope to see more from you.
7.9/10.
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Jan 8, 2012 14:59:31 GMT -5
Not bad, needed more of a jump though. It didnt look like he got any height. Kinda chopy and abit slow. So try to speed it up abit. And if you wouldve had him go higher i dont think it would have been as chopy casue there would have been more time for him to rotate if you know what i mean. Reaction need some work too. Just remember a reaction can make a animation look really good or bad. So take your time and dont rush reactions.
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Post by jman8463 on Jan 8, 2012 16:31:44 GMT -5
Not bad zombie your really improving. The beginning was good but it lacked elevation and it was fidgety, choppy and slow also the string was visible throughout the entire animation also your finger was shown on one of the frames so make sure you keep your body parts out as much as possible. Unfortunately due to the lack of elevation and choppiness the impact was relativity nothing and Miz didn't have a great reaction but the rope bounce was nicely done. Overall not to bad of an animation Zombie, just take your time and take as many pics as your can because I believe your improving.
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Post by Skits Hero on Jan 8, 2012 16:38:59 GMT -5
Nice one, saw some bit of blurry pictures, saw some string so.. Maybe you can try to get a bakground to make it invisible or edit them? He needed a jump, taunt at the beginning needed more pictures.. The ssp itself was very smooth though, I liked how he grabbed on his leggs to make it more of a proper SSP Impact was good, nice rop bounce.. You're improving.. :-D
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ZombieMan949
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ZMW Animations- The Real Dead Man
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Post by ZombieMan949 on Jan 8, 2012 18:50:49 GMT -5
Pretty good animation, Zombie. Christian in the air was a little slow, not so fidgety but still good. I noticed that while Christian was close but still not touching Miz, he just landed on him. (not sure if you got what I mean). Almost like it missed 2 pictures. Reaction is great, love the rope bounce, somehow I can't get it to bounce like that (thass wha she said). Editing string can be a hassle, so I won't take points off there. Overall, good animation. Hope to see more from you. 7.9/10. Thank you I know what you mean by how he landed. I think thats how they do it in wwe because they cant actually land on the guy so it was faked.
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