Holy !@#$ Angle Moonsault

[spiritjd33]

I probably ain't releasing this to youtube yet. But, hope it looks ok, first time using a cage of that size...and brand



hands above camera fail, I can admit I screwed up on that

[Zack]

i can tell that u were just starting to animate :Phere are the pros and cons:
pros:
prefect climbling and no strings seen
cons:
no reactions,shadows,stiff,hands and no ropes bounce
and please move miz when kurt's doing the moonsault
good attempt tbh 4/10

[spiritjd33]

it was AJ by the way. I was actually in a hurry on this one, but yea, getting rust off me still

[EAW122409]

The climbing was really good but the backflip looked floaty and shaky. Just work on your string work

[spiritjd33]

which reminds me, do you pros have your camera's on timer or just do the one handed balance?

[EAW122409]

Feb 11, 2011 9:33:02 GMT -5 spiritjd33 said:

which reminds me, do you pros have your camera's on timer or just do the one handed balance?

I don't use timer alot but when it's a really hard animation I use the timer. I like to go one handed some times because it a challenge and I like to challenge myself ;D

[spiritjd33]

I missed that post somewhere that I don't look at =/

[NEW™]

Good job, the climb up was great, smooth, not too stiff, I liked how Kurt looked back while he was on the top rope, but the moonsault was meh. It was somewhat of smooth, but still needs somemore pictures, Kurt was stiff, and the camera was shaky. But the pics were not blurry, and the lighting was good and did not change during the animation at all, which is pretty good. I see shadows and hands in the animation, but did not see any string in the animation, which is good. Not fidgety or floaty, the victim needs to be moving more during the climbing and the flip part, Kurt needs to do a squat before the moonsault to make it more realistic, and the reaction and impact (rope bounce) needs somemore work. Good job though.
OVERALL: 4/10

[Legoman:)]

good job. tkae a few more pictures and cut the shadows and hands. Good jon though.

[spiritjd33]

I gotta get black construction paper to eliminate the shadow in the background or/and get a better photo editing software

[''The Phenominal one'' TV2]

This was a great animation.
It was kinda choppy,and or fidgety.I saw your hand but you probally know that, and it lacked reaction.
7/10

[wweuniverse4787]

-The climbing looked good.
-The moonsault didn't have enough pictures.
-The camera was shaky.
-Was stiff.
-No reaction.
-Needed more pictures.


Take more photo's in your animations and they will become smoother, but try and keep the figures in the same place and the camera, because I have animations I think could become extremely smooth, but my problem is fidgetyness.... So keep everything still. Move the joints more, take some more photo's for the actual flip and the fall.
4/10 The climbing was good

[nickfoshiznitz]

Feb 21, 2011 10:26:53 GMT -5 wweuniverse4787 said:

-The climbing looked good.
-The moonsault didn't have enough pictures.
-The camera was shaky.
-Was stiff.
-No reaction.
-Needed more pictures.


Take more photo's in your animations and they will become smoother, but try and keep the figures in the same place and the camera, because I have animations I think could become extremely smooth, but my problem is fidgetyness.... So keep everything still. Move the joints more, take some more photo's for the actual flip and the fall.
4/10 The climbing was good

no offence but what the hell is wrong with you?! it wasn't stiff and its a hard animation to do, so i want to see you try to attempt this animation:) -love, Nickfoshiznitz

[The Viper]

Feb 26, 2011 0:21:00 GMT -5 nickfoshiznitz said:

Feb 21, 2011 10:26:53 GMT -5 wweuniverse4787 said:

-The climbing looked good.
-The moonsault didn't have enough pictures.
-The camera was shaky.
-Was stiff.
-No reaction.
-Needed more pictures.


Take more photo's in your animations and they will become smoother, but try and keep the figures in the same place and the camera, because I have animations I think could become extremely smooth, but my problem is fidgetyness.... So keep everything still. Move the joints more, take some more photo's for the actual flip and the fall.
4/10 The climbing was good

no offence but what the hell is wrong with you?! it wasn't stiff and its a hard animation to do, so i want to see you try to attempt this animation:) -love, Nickfoshiznitz

Dude, what the hell. He was just telling his opinion of the animation. You cant just randomly have a go at someone for commenting fairly on the animation, especially as he actually left a good, useful comment about the animation, unlike you.

Anyways, on to the animation. he climbing at the begining was perfect, it was completely smooth, very realistic, not stiff and no string seen. The actual moonsault itsel, however, was not as good i'm afraid. It was still smooth, but it was quite stiff, the camera was quite shakey, and i saw your hand.
So overall, not bad, 5.5/10