IwfAnimation
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Post by IwfAnimation on Apr 10, 2012 21:52:56 GMT -5
This match is between IwfAnimation and Jdp052208
Jdp052208:
IwfAnimation:
Who do you think is the better animator?
Leave your votes and tips below in the comment section. Voting ends in 48 Hours
UPDATE: Voting has ended and anyone whom votes after this update will not be counted
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Post by jman8463 on Apr 10, 2012 22:06:05 GMT -5
My vote goes to IwfAnimation.
IwfAnimation: The lift at the beginning was a little bit choppy and Shawn look fidgety, I like how Kofi
struggled while on Shawn's shoulders. Shawn looked really stiff along with Kingston but the table break
was good.
Jdp052208: The lift at the beginning of the animation was very choppy and stiff. Daniel Bryan was stiff
throwing Yoshi and had no movement going into the powerbomb itself. Yoshi looked fidgety in mid air.
The impact was good but there could have been a few more pics through the table.
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Post by cooperman4 on Apr 11, 2012 8:02:26 GMT -5
jdp052208 : A nice animation, one of your best ones so far. It had a really good lighting and a nice camera angle. The flow of the move wasn't that bad and the lift looked pretty much, decent. The reaction (impact) was pretty good as well. Also, I noticed that your string work improved a lot. The things you need to work on are the stiffness (bend the figures joints in each and every picture), having a better amount of photos (take a pic between each little movement), and working a slightly more on the reaction. Don't forget to have something that stops your camera from shaking (a tripod, DVDs, books etc).
IwfAnimation : A pretty good ani for someone who's rusty. The lift looked not bad, but it needed lots of pictures and it was pretty stiff. The movement flowed well however, and it had a decent fall. The angle of the cam was really good, and it wasn't shaky, but the ani looked pretty dark (due to the poor quality and to the background). I don't see lots of things to say on this one... Maybe, working more on stiffness and on having a better amount of pics as well.
As I said, it looks pretty good for a rusty animator, so just keep on practicing and you'll get back in the mood soon.
Really close match - I give this a draw.
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Post by IwfAnimation on Apr 12, 2012 15:06:00 GMT -5
It has been 48 hours and now i am the winner of this match with the score of 2-1. Yay I won a match!!!  |
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