double springboard moonsault...

[Zack]

it's a pain in teh butt doing this but this is just a warm up before making my stips for mayhem episode 1......enjoy,rate out of ten,subscribe and give tips to get better
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[Jesseversion1]

You are improving for sure.
First off it needed to be faster. If it were abit faster it would look way better.
It was alittle stiff so work on that next time.
Kinda chopy, needs more pics.
The reaction was decent it was good that you tried to make it look good rather then how othere people dont care to make it look good.
Overall it was ok
6/10

[NEW™]

Good job! You are improving! It was smooth, but I think you should have sped it up on the moonsault part, the moonsault was a tiny stiff in the elbow joints, the camera was a tiny shaky and blurry, but not too bad. The lighting was good and did not change during the animation at all, which is pretty good. I saw some string and shadows in the ani, but did not see any hands in the animation, which is good. Not fidgety or floaty, as Jesse said, get kind of a different background because the blue one is crumpled up and whatnot. Liked the squat before the jump, Triple needs to be moving more smoothly in the animation while Curt is doing the springboards, the reaction and impact (rope bounce when he hits the mat) needs a bit more work though. Good job.
OVERALL: 5/10

[''The Phenominal one'' TV2]

You are Impro....Do i even have to say?

The ani was good,but it was too stiff on the second jump and so on down.The reaction was ok,but there was some choppiness in there.
7/10

[The Viper]

Not bad. Very smooth, although maybe a little bit slow, could have done with being slightly faster. Also, take the string out of the picture once you've done using it, it looks weird to see a peice of string lying in the middle of the ring. Not particularly stiff, either.
Overall: 6/10