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Post by *WardyzProductions* on Apr 22, 2012 17:15:30 GMT -5
Stip : Spinning Roundhouse Kick WardyzProductions :  Jpsp (XBLKID) : Voting ends in 5 days |
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Post by jpsp98"THE XBLKID" on Apr 22, 2012 18:11:08 GMT -5
what series is that jeff hardy???
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Post by jman8463 on Apr 22, 2012 20:42:12 GMT -5
My vote goes to Wardy
Wardy: The jump over kick at the beginning of the animation was pretty smooth and it didn't look
choppy, stiff or fidgety. There were a lot of shadows during the animation which somewhat diminished
the flow of the animation. The second kick however was smooth and the movements flowed well. There
was a lot of impact and I like the way Jeff suddenly dropped fast into the canvas.
Jpsp: The first kick was pretty smooth and didn't look stiff, fidgety or choppy. The second kick however
looked choppy going into the kick and it looked a little bit to fast going into the impact.
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Post by *WardyzProductions* on Apr 23, 2012 5:18:58 GMT -5
what series is that jeff hardy??? I'm not sure... I know it's a basic jakks series on it's own (It was one of my first figures... about 5 years ago) |
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Post by cooperman on Apr 24, 2012 6:03:05 GMT -5
Wardyz : Pretty good animation. It was indeed pretty smooth and it had a great lighting. Angle of cam was really good and camera wasn't shaky. Didn't notice any shadow, but only strings. It wasn't that distracting though. The move flowed pretty well, and that little pause between the two kicks kinda made the ani, but choppiness and stiffness killed the thing. Your figs were really stiff, so work on that. It was also the source of choppiness. So make sure to bend every joint in each pic next time.
jpsp98 : Pretty good animation dude. You're impressing me! I liked the move as whole. But, you need to work on stiffness a slightly more and on having a better/lower angle of cam. This kinda ruined your work but the ani stills pretty good. I loved the way Morrison hits the first kick. You made sure to bend well the joints. It didn't look choppy as well. The second kick however needed few frames but I really liked it. So next time, work on stiffness more, on choppiness, and mostly, on the angle of the cam.
Great job both of you guys | DRAW.
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