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Post by jpsp98"THE XBLKID" on May 6, 2012 23:48:54 GMT -5
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Post by cooperman on May 7, 2012 0:29:13 GMT -5
630° Senton* (not splash) : decent one. It was a kinda smooth, but as most of your animations, it's ruined by the high angle of camera & that fast speed. Man, lower your angle. It's too high and its just annoying for people to watch the ani. The speed was bad. Slow down your anis a bit. Don't forget to have 1 sec for the first & last frame. Use like 0.07 speed? It's the one I use. Not too fast, not too slow. Otherwise, cool stuff. Skipped some frames & lacked reaction... could've worked on that  Crack em in da mouth : Running looked pretty very nice regardless of it being stiff. Well done. The move itself was decent. I mean nothing special. Just a kick so I don't have something to say. It was mainly choppy, stiff and a bit fidgetty. Still looked nice. B2B trough table : amazing ani. This one is by far, the best out of the lot. Loved the running. Wasn't that choppy/stiff. B2B iitself was sort of smooth. Unfortunately, HBK was stiff trough-out the move & JoMo was a tiny stiff when he was falling as well. Reaction and impact looked good though. Good job overall bro. You have really improved, so keep em coming  |
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Post by jman8463 on May 7, 2012 13:48:52 GMT -5
Crack Em In the Mouth: The running at the beginning of the animation was pretty smooth, the kick
itself needed a few more pictures but with the lack of frames, it made the kick have a lot of impact.
The blood was a little to little shaded and didn't match the consistency well and it was a little to fast
they way the blood came out. Pretty good animation overall though Jpsp
Belly To Belly Suplex Through a Table: The running at the beginning of the animation was a bit to fast and a bit jumpy. The Belly to Belly Suplex was very smooth and it didn't look fidgety or choppy in mid air although Shawn looked a little stiff after the Suplex. The table break was very nice and I liked the blood on Morrison back at the end of the animation. Next time, perhaps lowing your camera angle so we can see the full extent of the move would work much better.
630 Splash: I like the set up you had before the 630 Splash. The first
rotation in the 630 Splash was smooth but the second one midway was a
bit choppy in mid air and a little bit fidgety. The impact was good but
could have been a reaction at the end as the video cut short.
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Post by jpsp98"THE XBLKID" on May 15, 2012 22:10:24 GMT -5
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Post by jman8463 on May 16, 2012 13:27:09 GMT -5
Very nice running you have there jpsp98, it was very smooth and the movements look quiet fluent and the transition was well done. |
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Post by jpsp98"THE XBLKID" on May 16, 2012 17:20:04 GMT -5
thanks
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